Comments on: Day 26: Sorry. http://naet.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/day-25-sorry/ Hay guise. I'm back! :O Wed, 12 Aug 2009 03:42:57 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: N3ko! http://naet.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/day-25-sorry/#comment-71 N3ko! Sat, 19 Apr 2008 07:06:29 +0000 http://naet.wordpress.com/?p=30#comment-71 // Comment in general // I have no idea as to why I didn't put this up in the other one, but here it is anyway. Just keep at it. You've got great ideas that just need to be fleshed out more. You already know what I'll tell you. If you need anything, I'll help whenever I'm able. N:3K:O // Comment in general //

I have no idea as to why I didn’t put this up in the other one, but here it is anyway.

Just keep at it. You’ve got great ideas that just need to be fleshed out more. You already know what I’ll tell you. If you need anything, I’ll help whenever I’m able.

N:3K:O

]]> By: N3ko! http://naet.wordpress.com/2008/04/18/day-25-sorry/#comment-70 N3ko! Sat, 19 Apr 2008 07:04:07 +0000 http://naet.wordpress.com/?p=30#comment-70 A short story with plenty more potential to bloom into something a lot better. It's obvious to me that you wrote this story in a hurry, so I won't comment on the grammatical errors and such. I think you should develop it more. score: 4/5 (this is mostly based on idea and flow, with disregard to most grammar..etc.) N:3K:O A short story with plenty more potential to bloom into something a lot better. It’s obvious to me that you wrote this story in a hurry, so I won’t comment on the grammatical errors and such.

I think you should develop it more.

score: 4/5 (this is mostly based on idea and flow, with disregard to most grammar..etc.)

N:3K:O

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